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Lost in the dark.
I can’t read my conscience compass
let alone walk in the light.
The line has moved,
and I’m getting closer to it.
I cannot stop my thoughts from jumping over.
I wish I hadn’t charged though the boundaries.
Can I go back and rebuild them?
Will people notice the crumbling framework?
Will my thoughts escape from their decaying walls?
My legs are so tired, I cannot flee.
They are immobile, like pins and needles,
a dead limb, and an even deader heart,
numb through misuse.
I need the light to come,
to warm my aching joints,
to light my conscience’s way,
to show what lurks beyond the line,
and enlighten my broken memory.
Oh Light, come soon!
Remind me that you care.
©2007-2008 ~flying-spoon
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"I do not understand what I do. For what I want to do I do not do, but what I hate I do." - Paul (Romans 7:15)

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~michaelritchie200:iconmichaelritchie200: Apr 13, 2007, 2:13:04 PM
Again, stop with the stuff that's better than mine!

(Just know that that is a compliment).

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"The chances of anything coming from Mars are a million to one," he said.
"The chances of anything coming from Mars are a million to one ... but still, they come."
~flying-spoon:iconflying-spoon: Apr 14, 2007, 2:08:35 AM Mood: Zest
lol i wudnt go that that far, youre an amazing writer! but thankyou anyway

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look inside to find a deeper love~
~under-heavens-sky:iconunder-heavens-sky: Apr 14, 2007, 11:43:35 PM
I like this. I can relate to it in my own way. :)

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~You're beautiful my love, when I close my eyes, beautiful my love, under heaven's skies. -Collective Soul ~
~WrittenTalents:iconWrittenTalents: Apr 27, 2007, 3:48:06 PM
It's awesome!

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They say that poetry is stupid... but it isn't. For a poet can see beyond first glance. A poet can look at something and get something much deeper out of it. Poetry isn't dumb. Poetry moves the soul.